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The comments were helpful because it made me feel as if I was on the right track as well as the small grammatical mistakes I had made. She made changes to the details in the paper but no major changes were made or no comment was added on a way to improve upon it. I realized this, however, I am grateful for the feedback as I do not pay attention to the smaller details.
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The information I provided was helpful because I read over the paper and corrected the small errors that were on the paper, however, I might have missed some since writing is not my strong suit. I also gave Morgan ideas on how she could increase the length of her paper by adding some paragraphs.